Speak to only one. One question - one main idea. All What you say must be direct and obvious way to treat the main ideas of your speech. Alas, in this speech, the president, we do not find such attempts to classify. Initially, the president spoke about the difficult past year - an understandable and even necessary theme New Year's address. But is this the main theme? - No. Next president assures us that we will succeed and we will be as strong as ever - it's a great theme for New Year's speech, but it finds no development, tearing along with the second paragraph.
Next thought - 65 Years of Victory, a very brief filed and completely undeveloped. Next thought - that the country's success depends on each one of us. Next - about family events and parents, the next - that the state loves us. And then wishes for your happiness. What does this statement? I wanted to tell the president? What he achieved this speech? In our meticulously-rhetorical view New Year's address failed precisely because it lacks the main idea. Granted, highlight it is not difficult. Example: The main idea is one that "Russia's success depends on each of us." Then Reinvent the first paragraph of type "was a tough year, but the troubles brought us together, we became closer to each other, and realized that only with the efforts of everyone, we can achieve the success of the country." The second paragraph remake into something like this: "Russia has always been a strong union of citizens, it is willing to rush every single person has won, which we celebrate in the attack.
" The third paragraph makes a deployment of such a thought: "Now for success Russia does not need , we need to start small - with our loved ones, let everyone start right now, because the New Year - a holiday home. " And to finish everything like this: "Suppose that in the coming you could do it, because then we get and all of Russia. " As you can see all the highlights of the original speech are preserved, but they are linked to the main idea - the success of Russia depends on each one of us. This idea will be easy to remember and reproduce, it will remain in the memory of listeners. In the current form of his New Year address the president is doomed to oblivion. Here you are, for example, long remembered, as mentioned by Dmitry Medvedev, on the night of Jan. 1? That's the point. Y Each speech should be one main idea.
Next thought - 65 Years of Victory, a very brief filed and completely undeveloped. Next thought - that the country's success depends on each one of us. Next - about family events and parents, the next - that the state loves us. And then wishes for your happiness. What does this statement? I wanted to tell the president? What he achieved this speech? In our meticulously-rhetorical view New Year's address failed precisely because it lacks the main idea. Granted, highlight it is not difficult. Example: The main idea is one that "Russia's success depends on each of us." Then Reinvent the first paragraph of type "was a tough year, but the troubles brought us together, we became closer to each other, and realized that only with the efforts of everyone, we can achieve the success of the country." The second paragraph remake into something like this: "Russia has always been a strong union of citizens, it is willing to rush every single person has won, which we celebrate in the attack.
" The third paragraph makes a deployment of such a thought: "Now for success Russia does not need , we need to start small - with our loved ones, let everyone start right now, because the New Year - a holiday home. " And to finish everything like this: "Suppose that in the coming you could do it, because then we get and all of Russia. " As you can see all the highlights of the original speech are preserved, but they are linked to the main idea - the success of Russia depends on each one of us. This idea will be easy to remember and reproduce, it will remain in the memory of listeners. In the current form of his New Year address the president is doomed to oblivion. Here you are, for example, long remembered, as mentioned by Dmitry Medvedev, on the night of Jan. 1? That's the point. Y Each speech should be one main idea.
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